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The current data has little info about breeding the tomato clown. Nobody could learn how to breed tomato clowns from the current information

THIS COPY HAS BEEN REVISED AND SPELL CHECKED!

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I'm sorry, but there are still a number of errors, especially grammatical.

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"a tank by them selves" should be "a tank by themselves"
"dominate" should be "dominant"
" toxic chemicals touch, it especially" should be " toxic chemicals touch it, especially "

I think the rest of it needs to be changed a little:
"Once you notice that the clowns have stopped fighting they will be ready to spawn. To provide them with something to lay their eggs on you can add something like a clay tile. (Which should have never had any toxic chemicals touch, it especially copper)
After a few days of you placing the tile in the tank they will probably lay their eggs there but they might find a more suitable place. Usually they like near “their” anemone."

Once the clowns have stopped fighting they will be ready to spawn. Provide them with something to lay their eggs on such as a clay tile. (Which should have never had any toxic chemicals touch, it especially copper)
After a few days they will lay their eggs but might find a more suitable place. Usually they like a place near “their” anemone."

That is just some examples. I dont want to rewrite it for you

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