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clownloachfan
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Created new profile for review
Post InfoPosted 18-Oct-2007 01:54Profile Homepage PM Edit Report 
Joe Potato
 
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"Make sure not to mix Yasuhikotakia sidthimunki with large or aggressive fish as they will steal all of the food or harm them."

You use too many ouns. It's hard to tell who "they" and "them" at the end. I assume that the "they" refers to the large/aggressive fish and the "them" is the loach.

"Yasuhikotakia sidthimunki is the smallest member of the Botia genus."

Except they're not in that genus anymore.

Other than that, it looks pretty good to me.
Post InfoPosted 18-Oct-2007 06:53Profile Homepage AIM PM Edit Report 
clownloachfan
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thanks joe, is there anyway i coul edit the profile i created? i also found another error-They are usually sold for a very high price because they are endangered in "there" native habitat. should be their
Post InfoPosted 18-Oct-2007 16:44Profile Homepage PM Edit Report 
Joe Potato
 
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Yeah, you can edit it should it be approved. Good point about the price. I haven't seen them for less than $10 a piece for a couple of years now.
Post InfoPosted 18-Oct-2007 18:49Profile Homepage AIM PM Edit Report 
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