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	Update: Chilodonella; Field: Treatment
RNJ_Punk Big Fish Cory Fanatic Posts: 395 Kudos: 114 Votes: 137 Registered: 12-Nov-2006
Posted 11-May-2007 05:45
longhairedgit Fish Guru Lord of the Beasts Posts: 2502 Kudos: 1778 Votes: 29 Registered: 21-Aug-2005	Approve
Posted 14-May-2007 03:04
Callatya Moderator The girl's got crabs! Posts: 9662 Kudos: 5261 Registered: 16-Sep-2001	Reject Info is good, but the writing style is a bit too casual and confusing. I think it is because you have kept the original text as it was instead of altering it to suit your new additions. Keep the content and just rephrase it to make it easier to understand ("nail" is not simple for someone with basic English to understand in that context) For animals, the entire universe has been neatly divided into things to (a) mate with, (b) eat, (c) run away from, and (d) rocks. - Terry Pratchett
Posted 17-May-2007 04:45
Lindy Administrator Show me the Shishies! Posts: 1507 Kudos: 1350 Votes: 730 Registered: 25-Apr-2001	Reject Before you criticize someone walk a mile in their shoes. That way you're a mile away and you have their shoes.
Posted 19-May-2007 13:55
ACIDRAIN Moderator Posts: 3162 Kudos: 1381 Votes: 416 Registered: 14-Jan-2002	Reject Yep, agree, do a re-write and submit it _____________________________________________________________ There is always a bigger fish...
Posted 19-May-2007 15:34


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