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Profile:Neolamprologus tretocephalus
Field:care
Status:Approved
Votes:8
Submitter:renegade545
Reason:Grammar, and puncuation. Also added a bit of info.
Old Text:Thrives on a good flake food diet, supplemented with quality pellets and frozen foods Clean, hard, alkaline water. Rocky tank, with sand substrate. Efficient filtration required. Not for the community tank, keep with similar Tanganyikan cichlids.
New Text:Thrives on a good flake food diet, supplemented with quality pellets and frozen foods. Requires Cleanclean, hard, and alkaline water. RockyProvide a rocky tank, with a sand substrate. Efficientsubstrata. As filtrationwith required. any tank provide efficient filtration. Not for the community tank, keep with similar sized and temperamented Tanganyikan cichlids.
Votes
MemberVoteWeight
LindyApprove4
Joe PotatoApprove2
NatalieApprove2
renegade545Neutral0
Total: 8
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renegade545Grammar, and puncuation. Also added a bit of info.
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